Friday, August 23, 2013

FACE BLIND

Here is the beginning of the second mystery novel in the Banner Bluff series.  It's titled FACE-BLIND.  Please read it and tell me what you think.  Thank you.


Face Blind - Prologue

Martin got out of the car and pulled up his hood. He was glad the parking lot was empty.  He didn’t want to have to face anybody.  The tension he felt in public was exhausting.  Here he could let down his guard and breathe free.  

             It was getting dark and the air felt cold and damp.  They’d had a surprisingly mild fall but now in November, winter was looming.  Overhead trees creaked as they swayed in the wind.  Leaves spiraled away like miniature helicopters. He took a deep breath and felt the cleansing power of the cold air fill his lungs.     

            He opened the back door of the car and Jack, his golden retriever, bounded across the parking lot and into the undergrowth.  Undoubtedly he was onto the scent of a rabbit or squirrel.  Martin pulled on his gloves and headed down the dirt path whistling for Jack to follow. 

            He had had to get out of the house for a little while.  This had been one of those bad days.  That morning, after Kate had left, he’d hustled Rosie upstairs to get dressed for school. Meanwhile eight month old Stevie had spilled water from the dog’s bowl all over the kitchen floor.  After he’d mopped up, Rosie still hadn’t come down. So he’d picked up Stevie and gone back up to check on her.  She was sitting on the floor in her underpants and socks playing with Lego.   He glared at her and she glared back.

            “Come on Rosie, we have to get going.  You’re going to be late.  Here, put on these striped leggings and your pink daisy dress.

            “Those leggings are too tight and that dress scratches.” She scowled at him.

            He reached into the drawer for another outfit. “How about these polka dot tights?”

            “Daddy, I don’t have a dress that matches them.”

            After extensive negotiations, he’d finally got her dressed.  They had barely arrived at Banner Bluff Elementary on time.

            Then he’d gone over to Appleby’s to pick up a few groceries.  They were going to have tacos for dinner and he’d found the box of taco shells and the taco seasoning packet.  Stevie was sitting placidly in the grocery cart mouthing an animal cracker.  Martin left the cart in the aisle for just a second to run back and grab some grated cheddar and a gallon of milk.   When he came back, he smiled at Stevie and started to push the cart towards the checkout counter.  Just then a woman came up behind him screaming,

            “Hey!  What are you doing?  That’s my cart.   That’s my little boy.”

            He turned as this woman pushed him away and grabbed the shopping cart.  Her cheeks bore bright red spots and her mouth formed an angry slice across her face.   “What are you anyway; some kind of pervert?”
To be continued.....

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